g-r4ve's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[La-La La La-La]

lol

Nice singing lol. Reminded me of one of those cheesy trance songs... like 'im blue' or whatever. Just cant think of who made a lalala song. Anyways.. your singing doesnt really go with the drumming. Your bassline is good and so is that sound effect lol. Argh ur songs starting to grow on me lolol

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TheUrbanNinjaGirl responds:

this song was a test to see if i could record my voice without killing my microphone. my next song will be better, trust me.

[Moce Trance]

moo

Next time increase the quality of the song a bit. U had some synths clipping as well, but they just created some fuzziness which actually added to the song. So thats alright I guess. Nice bassline, really added to it. I'd say it was a pretty good song, just needs a bit of work.

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Epitaph64 responds:

Yeah thanks. I am still working on the leveling but I submitted to where I was last night hehe. thanks for the review.

[I Like to Move it [Rave Mix]]

yo

Pretty good remix. Had some nice hard basses in it... I guess the only thing that was missing was the vox lol. You could work on the diversity... cus all it was was repeating basslines. You shouldn't base your song around a bassline, but rather use your bassline to structure ur song in a way that its always following a solid pattern.

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Dj-Fanta5t1c responds:

yes, i do need to work on that. icon of coil really inspires me to make msuc now! its all industrial techno o yea im too cool for school!

thx for teh review!!!

[Heavens dancefloor (light mix)]

relaxing

A very nice piece of music u got here. The ever changing lead synth melodys kept it from getting boring, while everything else just added to the beat. An upbeat and relaxing listen, the only thing I had a problem with were the drums.

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Music-story responds:

Yeah, for some reason my computer speakers are screwed up. My next songs I will listen to via the computer speakers AND the labtop speakers. Gotta make sure the Snare drum doesn't go super loud on me. Glad you thought by leading synth is everchanging. Thanks for the review.

[1st thing i ever made]

needs work

I listen to and make, alot of commercial electronic music so my opinion is based entirely on wat I want to hear. So ill give u suggestions on how to make your song sound more proffesional. For starters, alot of your sounds are overlapping, and blurring together making it hard to distinguish a melody. Its okay for the song to feel empty, but having too much in there is bad. Try putting effects on your synths and drums. Look into getting some new sounds, or making your own, because the standard FL presets are really overused here. A harder kick, and a louder clap would make the song more dancey, and a louder bass would add energy. Try and make your song have a similar note pattern, it helps create rythme. With all the suggestions I could think of being said, overall I thought this song needs TONS of work. But it was infecting and I looped it many times because it was easy to listen to. END OF REVIEW LOL. Go check out my techno

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[Disorted Synth ByDarkMcShadowX]

hmm

U had a cool synth playing... but the melody was a tad offkey, and your beat was a little weak. Good job making those phased synths tho, they had a creepy sound to em. You needed a harder snare and kick, but your hi hats were ok. The gating was a little distracting as well, u should crank the release up. Overal 4/5 but ill five it

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DarkMcShadowX responds:

thnx Man i like reveiws like thease.

yea i relaize that that meloladie at the bigning was difrent than the bade synth i should just make it the same i gess. I probbaly need better drum samples.

Gaiting? meaning the up and down or the litle cliking of that phaser synth?

Ill fixe this one up
Thnx for the reveiw Mate!

-- DarkMcShadowX --

[dj_padman - Last Stand]

mmm cash..

Good trance... some nice builds, melodys etc.. A tad bit repetitive in places, but overall good evolution throughout the song. I guess work on the beats a little bit, to try and bring more energy into your tracks. Otherwise good work

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dj-padman1 responds:

cheers mr rave. More beats? Thats a good idea!

[Solus- Tangerine Dreams]

whoa

I was expecting some proffesional dance techno or something for some reason lol. Well... where do I start. That was definately original, diverse for the most part... bleh. Way too much for me to comment on. I'll just throw some suggestions down.
Watch ur reveerb cus it got a little crazy in some places. Possibly a more distinct beat..? Your click kick definately fit in with the wierdness, but a little more obvious beat probably woulda helped the song along. Its music like this that keeps the portal interesting, so ill five.

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SolusLunes responds:

Yeah, I could have done some pro dance techno, and that IS fun to make, but I was trying to do something completely fuckwitted here.

Where's the crazy reverb? Because I was playing with it, and I'm not quite sure which some places you're talking about.

I was seriously considering putting in a thudding bass kick to rock the house... but nah.

[Teh LoLgang is on the loose!]

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DarKsidE555 responds:

ok. :(

[Doomsday--_--(1:49)]

too lazy

to review, so ill just fivezor.

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